This has useful ideas and with some modifications it could become an "official" Epicurean phamplet.
Suggestions for a few changes and additions.
#7 - is there source material on this? (though it's true, yet it sounds a bit "dark")
#10 - delete "No matter how cute she is." (Or change it to: "No matter how cute they are.")
#11 - change the "pulling wings off flies" analogy to something else such as playing Pokemon.
#13 - add a bit more of an explanation on this point
Add something about natural justice (?)
Possibly site reference numbers to PD's, etc.