The numbering appears to be a bit odd.
Other than that, I noticed only one bug: I guess that
"..., the wise one will not let the passions hinder progress towards wisdom once they’ve become wise"
should be
"..., the wise one will not let the passions hinder progress towards wisdom once he has become wise".
It seems at every corner, we encounter wrong translations or significant differences between translations. Thanks for exposing some more.