Few things that crossed my mind: 1. The concept of free will is a crucial part of Epicurean Ethics. Swerving atoms and the consequence of this phenomenon should be included in the steps. 2. Maybe it would be beneficial to name the concepts where applicable when describing ethical ideas (things like: atomism, hedonism, hedonistic calculus, egoism etc.) 3. I agree with Don that points 5 & 6 are closely linked together. (Quote from Kalosyni) 4. I'd personally drop the idea of mentioning climate cha…